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Post by Captain Man Fan on Jan 23, 2019 9:39:33 GMT -8
Henry Danger Cast Raymond "Ray" Manchester/Captain Man: Cooper Barnes Raymond "Ray" Manchester (Flashbacks): Kale Culley Henry Hart/Kid Danger: Jace Norman Siren Hart: Kelly Sullivan Jack Hart: Jeffrey Nicholas Brown Piper Hart: Ella Anderson Jasper Dunlop: Sean Ryan Fox Charlotte Page: Riele Downs Schwoz Schwartz: Michael D. Cohen
Special Guest Stars Dr. Carl Manchester, Ray's father: Mark Hulbert Cara Manchester, Ray's long lost mother: Marina Sirtis
Recurring Cast Gooba Gooch: Duncan Bravo Oliver Pook: Matthew Zhang Sidney Birnbaum: Joe Kaprielian Winnie Schwartz, Schwoz's sister: Kevin Allen Byshelle "Bysh" Bilsky: Marisa Baram Trent Overunder: Winston Story Mary Gaperman: Carrie Barrett Ms. Sharona Shapen: Jill Benjamin
Villains Dr. Minyak: Mike Ostroski The Toddler: Ben Giroux Shaft: Hawk Walts Phone Shark: Jon Dixon Nurse Cohort: Amber Bela Muse Dr. Thomas James/Drill Finger: Daniel Kaemon Dan Schneider (voice) Jeff: Ryan Grassmeyer The Spoiler: Noland Ammon Derek and Madison "Maddy" Richards: Gus Kamp and Lolli Sorenson Axel: Michael Kupisk Dennis: Shayne Topp Van Del: Josh Fingerhut Veronika: Madison Iseman Time Jerker: Joey Richter Dirk: Toby Wilson Alien Girl: Julia May Wong Gwen: Courtney Henggeler Drex: Tommy Walker Noelle: Annalisa Cochrane Jim Dickle and Neil: Unknown Ballerino Brothers: Tim Storms (one wearing purple) Frankini Valentine: Frankie Grande Goomer: Zoran Korach Steven Sharp: Charlie Burg Joey: Jerry Tranior Mark: Jim Mahoney Stainless Steve: Eddie Davenport
The Blanchard Family Glenndon "Leo" "Glen" "Geo" "Don" Blanchard/Captain Ice, Ray's best friend: Geoff Shakayla "Kayla" "Kaya" Blanchard, Glenndon's twin sister, Schwoz's love interest: Elizabeth Mitchell Jamarcus "Marcus" Blanchard, Glenndon and Shakayla's father: Jeff Bridges Charmeka "Carma" Blanchard, Glenndon and Shakayla's mother: Christine Baranski Glenndon "BJ" Blanchard Jr., Glenndon and Raymerra's son, Charlotte's love interest: Koby Rouviere Jeanessa "Jessa" Blanchard, Glenndon and Raymerra's daughter, BJ's twin sister, Jasper's love interest: Rowan Blanchard Hollyana "Holly" Blanchard, Glenndon and Raymerra's daughter, Henry's new love interest: Mackenzie Foy
The Blue Family Raymella "Rya" "Raya" "Mal" Blue: Amber Raymerra "Mya" "Mara" "Mae" Blanchard/Captain Fire, Raymella's twin sister, Glenndon's wife: Me Brenda Blue, Raymella and Raymerra's mother: Eva Whittle Brendan Blue, Raymella and Raymerra's father: Eva Whittle's husband Carmen Sandiego, Raymella and Raymerra's grandmother, Brenda's mother: Rita Moreno Carmel Sandiego, Raymella and Raymerra's grandfather, Brenda's father: Pierce Bronsan Iana Malcolm, Raymella and Raymerra's aunt, Brenda's sister: Terri Irwin Ian Malcolm, Raymella and Raymerra's uncle, Brenda's brother-in-law: Jeff Goldblum
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Post by Captain Man Fan on Jan 23, 2019 9:54:17 GMT -8
Chapter 1 Reunited At Last
Scene: Junk N Stuff, Swellveiw, California. One day Ray Manchester is up in Junk N Stuff looking after the store while Henry, Charlotte and Jasper are at school. All of a sudden, Schwoz came through the curtain going to down the Man-Cave. SCHWOZ: Dr. Minyak has take two women as his hostages. RAY: Alright, I will rescue them. Ray took out his special gum then popped a piece into his mouth and started chew it. A few minutes later Ray blew a bubble turning him into Captain Man. Captain Man where Dr. Minyak had the two women as hostage. All of a sudden, Captain Man’s superhero friend Captain Ice showed up. CAPTAIN MAN: What are you doing here? CAPTAIN ICE: I had to save them especially the one with her up with a hair clip because if anything happen to her I would never forgive myself. Captain Man suddenly noticed that one of the women is Raymella Blue the woman has been in love with since their second last year of high school. Captain Man and Captain Ice came running into the building. CAPTAIN MAN: Let them go now Dr. Minyak. DR. MINYAK: No, I cannot do because I am going to make one of them fall in love with me. RAYMERRA: I will never ever fall for you because I am married to love of my life and he is the man I will ever love. CAPTAIN ICE: (in his mind) That’s my girl. RAYMELLA: I also will never fall for you because my heart belongs to someone else. CAPTAIN MAN: (in his mind) The chances of her heart belong to me is very slim but I can still hope that it is me. Captain Ice started to walk towards Raynella and Raymella. CAPTAIN ICE: I cannot allow you to hurt them. DR. MINYAK: What are you going to do? CAPTAIN ICE: I am going to put you on ice. Captain Ice used his ice powers to freeze Dr. Minyak. Captain Ice walked over to where Raymella and Raynella are. RAYMERRA: Thank you Captain Ice. CAPTAIN ICE: You are welcome Mara. RAYNELLA: Wow, you remember my name. CAPTAIN ICE: I would never ever forget a beautiful face like you. RAYMERRA: Thanks Captain Ice but it will never work out because I am married to love of my life. CAPTAIN ICE: Yes, I know that Mae. RAYMERRA: There is only one person who calls me Mae. CAPTAIN ICE: Who is that? RAYMERRA: My husband Leo Blanchard. Captain Ice smiled then spun around turning into Glendon in front of Raymerra. GLENNDON: Hi, cupcake. RAYMERRA: Wow, you have been Captain Ice all this time. GLENNDON: Yes, that right beautiful. RAYMERRA: Wow, I love you even more now that I know that truth. Captain Man united Raymella. CAPTAIN MAN: What is your name? RAYMELLA: My name is Raymella Blue but please call me Mal. CAPTAIN MAN: I am Swellview’s resident superhero Captain Man. RAYMELLA: Thanks for saving me. CAPTAIN MAN: You’re welcome Mal. Raymella smiled. Captain Man took Raymella to safety then left. RAYMELLA: Wow, Captain Man is so gorgeous. GLENNDON: (sotto voce to Raymerra) Captain Man is secretly my best friend. RAYMERRA: (sotto voce) Isn’t your best Ray Manchester? GLENNDON: (sotto voce) Yes, he is. RAYMERRA: (sotto voce) Ray went to school with us. Glenndon nodded his head. Raynella looked at Raymella. RAYMELLA: Hi sis. RAYMERRA: Mal, do you remember Ray Manchester? RAYMELLA: Yes, yes, I do. I miss him more than words can say. RAYMERRA: Why is that? RAYMELLA: I started to develop feelings for him our last year of high school but I never got up the nerve to tell him how I feel. Glenndon grinned. GLENNDON: I want the two of you to come somewhere with me. RAYMERRA: Where are we going handsome? GLENNDON: You will see when we get there. Glenndon took Raymella and Raynella to Junk N Stuff. RAYMELLA: What is this place? GLENNDON: It is a really cool store owned by my best friend. The three of them walked inside. Ray is standing behind the counter. Raymella noticed Ray right away and gasped. RAYMELLA: Ray Manchester, is that you? RAY: Yes, it is. RAYMELLA: I cannot believe it and I thought I would never ever see again. Ray smiled then walked out behind the counter and pulled Raymella into his embrace. RAY: I thought I would never see again Mal. RAYMELLA: Mal is the name that my family calls me but I prefer to be called Rya now. RAY: Rya, I like that. RAYMELLA: Ray, I miss you so much. RAY: I missed you too. RAYMELLA: This store is awesome. RAY: (in his mind) You will forget all about that it be awesome when you see the Man-Cave (talking) Thank you Rya. Raymella, Glenndon and Raymerra stayed for awhile at Junk N Stuff then went home. Raymella walked up her bedroom and laid on her bed thinking about Ray. Raymella’s mother Brenda is walking by and noticed her daughter in deep thought. Brenda walked into Raymella’s bedroom. BRENDA: Hi, baby girl. Raymella snapped back to reality. RAYMELLA: Hi, mother. BRENDA: What were you thinking about? RAYMELLA: I was thinking about Ray Manchester. BRENDA: Oh, I remember him. RAYMELLA: I seen him early at his store Junk N Stuff. He is so gorgeous and sexy now. Brenda smiled. BRENDA: Mal, are you in love with him? RAYMELLA: Yes, yes, I am. BRENDA: Did you tell him? RAYMELLA: I really wanted to but I am scared that he doesn’t feel the same way. BRENDA: The only way to find it is tell him how you feel. RAYMELLA: I will tell him tomorrow. BRENDA: That’s my baby girl. RAYMELLA: Will you come with me? BRENDA: Yes, of course baby girl because I want to see how much Ray has changed. Raymella smiled. A few hours later Raymella is bed dreaming about Ray and telling her how she feels. Ray is in his bed in the Man-Cave dreaming about telling Raymella his feelings and her finding that he is Captain Man. Raymerra is sleeping Glenndon’s embrace. Brenda is sleeping Brendan’s embrace.
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Post by Ray/Captain Man's Wife on Jan 23, 2019 23:21:33 GMT -8
That was a good chapter. I like the parts between Raymella and Captain Man, Raymella and Ray and Raymella and her mother. By the way this sentence: He is so gorgeous and hot now. I would have wrote like this: He is so gorgeous and sexy now. I never have my characters use the would hot when they are talking about a guy that they're in love with. I always use gorgeous and sexy.
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Post by Captain Man Fan on Jan 24, 2019 3:18:01 GMT -8
I had a feeling you'd like those parts and I changed it to sexy instead.
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Post by Ray/Captain Man's Wife on Jan 24, 2019 6:35:42 GMT -8
Cool. Thanks. That looks a lot better now and it looks like something Raymella (my character) would say.
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Post by Captain Man Fan on Jan 24, 2019 13:31:24 GMT -8
You're welcome.
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Post by Captain Man Fan on Jan 26, 2019 7:14:15 GMT -8
Chapter 2 Time Jerker Kidnaps Brenda
Scene: Streets of Swellveiw, California. It is now the next day which is Saturday. Raymella and Brenda are walking to Junk N Stuff when suddenly Time Jerker came up behind Brenda. Time Jerker grabbed Brenda covering her mouth so she couldn’t scream for help and dragged her way. Raymella turned around and noticed that her mother is walking behind her anymore. Raymella gasped then ran the rest of the way to Junk N Stuff. Raymella walked into Junk N Stuff to find Jasper Dunlop behind the counter. JASPER: Can I help you miss? RAYMELLA: Yes, yes, you can by getting Ray Manchester for me. JASPER: How do you know Ray? RAYMELLA: Ray and I went to school together. JASPER: Ray told me that he doesn’t want any visitors today. RAYMELLA: Why? JASPER: He said something about having a headache. RAYMELLA: This is an emergency. Jasper pushed the button the side of counter that connects the Man-Cave. Ray suddenly came through from out back. RAY: Jasper, I told you not to bothering me. RAYMELLA: Hi, Ray. Ray suddenly noticed Raymella. RAY: Rya, what are you doing here? RAYMELLA: I was on my way here with my mother she got kidnapped. RAY: Oh, that is not good. RAYMELLA: Yes, yes, I know. RAY: (looking at Jasper) Go tell Henry to meet me outside right away. JASPER: Yes, of course. RAYMELLA: Are you going to save my mother? RAY: No, I am not but I am going to get someone that can. RAYMELLA: Do you mean Captain Man? RAY: Yes, that is who I mean. RAYMELLA: Captain Man is so gorgeous. RAY: (in his mind) She has a crush on Captain Man so I better not let her find out that he is me or she will hate me forever. RAYMELLA: What are you thinking about Ray? RAY: It is nothing important. Henry stuck his head inside the door of Junk N Stuff. HENRY: Ray Manchester, let’s go now. Ray nodded his head. Ray went outside then went back down to Man-Cave. They took out their special bubble gum. They both popped a piece of gum into their mouths at the same. They chewed for a few minutes than blew bubbles turning them into Captain Man and Kid Danger. They went to save Brenda Blue. They found Brenda with the Time Jerker. CAPTAIN MAN: What are you doing? TIME JERKER: I am going to make Brenda Blue never be born. CAPTAIN MAN: Why? TIME JERKER: I know that you are in love with her daughter and I cannot have that. CAPTAIN MAN: Time Jerker, I will never ever let you hurt her or her daughter. TIME JERKER: Dr. Minyak gave me the tears of the Jolly Beetle. Captain Man gasped. CAPTAIN MAN: No, you cannot do that because Swellveiw needs Captain Man to protector it from villains like you. TIME JERKER: The only way I will let you keep your powers if you never ever tell Brenda’s daughter that you love her. CAPTAIN MAN: I cannot do that. All of a sudden, Captain Ice showed up with a superhero that Captain Man has never seen. CAPTAIN ICE: Hi, Captain Ice. I thought you could you use some help. CAPTAIN MAN: Who is this the new superhero with you? CAPTAIN ICE: I am going to let her introduce herself. CAPTAIN FIRE: Hi, my name is Captain Fire. CAPTAIN MAN: (sotto voce) Is she Mya? Captain Ice nodded his head. CAPTAIN ICE: Yes, she is. CAPTIAN MAN: Oh, that is cool. CAPTAIN ICE: She always had a super power but the only one that knew was her mother. Captain Man walked over to where Brenda is and untied her. BRENDA: Thank you. CAPTAIN MAN: You’re welcome. My name is Captain Man and I am Swellview’s resident superhero. BRENDA: How did you know I was in trouble? CAPTAIN MAN: Ray Manchester told me after your daughter told him. BRENDA: Where is my daughter? CAPTAIN MAN: I will take you to her. Captain Man took Brenda to Junk N Stuff where Raymella is waiting just as Raymerra and Glenndon walked into the store too, Raymella ran over to her mother and hugged her. RAYMELLA: Mother, I am so glad that you are okay. BRENDA: I am thanks to Captain Man. RAYMELLA: (turning to Captain Man) Thank you Captain Man. CAPTAIN MAN: I was just doing my job as a superhero. RAYMELLA: You are so brave and strong. CAPTAIN MAN: Thanks. It helps having the power of indestructibility. Captain Man left then a few minutes later Ray came out of the back room. RAY: What did I miss? RAYMELLA: Captain Man saved my mother and brought her back here. RAY: Wow that is cool. BRENDA: Hi, Ray. It is nice to see you again. RAY: Hello Mrs. Blue. BRENDA: Ray, you can call me Brenda. RAY: Oh okay. BRENDA: How have you been? RAY: I have been very good. BRENDA: Could I talk to you alone? RAY: Yes, of course. Brenda and Ray went out of earshot. BRENDA: Are you wondering why I wanted to talk to you about? RAY: Yes, that thought crossed my mind. BRENDA: I wanted to know what you think of Raymella. RAY: Raymella was my best friend for as long as I can remember but the second last year of high school all that changed. BRENDA: What do you mean? RAY: I realized that I was falling in love with her. BRENDA: Do you still feel that way? RAY: Yes, I do. I have only fallen more in love with since she came back into my life. BRENDA: Are you going to tell her how you feel? RAY: Yes, I will when the time is right. BRENDA: Ray, I won’t wait too long because those kinds of feelings will eat you alive. RAY: Yes, I am aware of that Brenda. BRENDA: Ray, I need you promise me two things when you tell my daughter your feelings. RAY: What is that? BRENDA: I want you to promise that you will protect her at all costs and never break her heart. RAY: I promise you Brenda that I will protect her and I will never ever break her heart. BRENDA: Thank you Ray. RAY: You’re welcome Brenda. A few hours later Raymella is her bedroom thinking about Ray when her mother walked by the room. BRENDA: Are you thinking about Ray again? RAYMELLA: Yes, yes, I am. BRENDA: I thought so. RAYMELLA: What you talking to Ray about early when you wanted to talk to him alone? BRENDA: I love to tell her that baby girl but it is not place to say and you will find out when the time is right. Raymella smiled a little. Brenda left. Raymella feel asleep dreaming about Ray and being his girlfriend someday. Ray is in his bed in the Man Cave dreaming about Raymella being his girlfriend after he tells her his feelings for her. Raymerra is sleeping in Glenndon’s embrace. Brenda is sleeping in Brendan’s embrace.
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Post by Ray/Captain Man's Wife on Jan 27, 2019 3:30:56 GMT -8
That was a good chapter. I like the parts between Raymella, Brenda, Ray and Captain Man.
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Post by Captain Man Fan on Jan 27, 2019 8:21:06 GMT -8
Thanks, I had a feeling you'd like those parts.
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